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Business Plan Tips

What Investors Are Looking For In A Plan

Investors, whether angels or VC's, are looking for the same things when reading a business plan. They want to know how big the opportunity is, whether this is the right team to exploit the opportunity, who the competition is, what the risks are, and why they can expect this team to implement successfully. Your job in writing the business plan is to address these questions convincingly and clearly.

Emphasize Your Real Strengths

Highlight what your team brings to the table. If your business hinges on a particular competency (for example, understanding the procurement process), your plan will be more persuasive if one of your team members knows something about it and that is brought out in your plan. Rather than including generic resumes of team members, tailor the resumes to draw out the experience each member has that will make him or her a valuable contributor.

Get To The Point And Make It Clear And Comprehensive

Investors see many business plans. A 20-page plan which clearly lays out your business is far more likely to be read than a 100 page plan. Today, some entrepreneurs are using a 15 slide Powerpoint presentation. If your text is short and punchy, you won't need to repeat yourself, because the reader won't be bogged down keeping ten chapters in their head. Reading the same thing over and over, even if it's in different words, can get really tiring. The more you use brevity and give each concept a single home in your document, the more people will want to read it.

Write In Plain English

If you can't explain your idea in English, either you don't understand what you're talking about (What is a transaction enabled atomic journaling database server, anyway?) or you haven't simplified the idea enough. Think, revise, and try again.

Get Rid Of The Hype

Yes, we know you will be the "premier insert product category here of the Internet, achieving 99% market penetration with 60% customer retention in 3 months". Your product will reach "new heights in customer experience through the use of personalization and one-to-one profiling and customization". It will be "user friendly" because you will be creating a truly "ecstatic customer experience". It is a "quantum leap forward" in the marketplace for product category here. Um, yeah. Believe me, we've read it before. About a dozen times today, in fact. (And by the way, the phrase "quantum leap" really doesn't mean anything.) Stick to a tight, simple explanation of your idea. Convince your reader you'll be the best because your idea is the best, not because you can string a dozen buzzwords together.

Use Quantifiable Information

In each section, back up your assertions with solid facts. Even if you are a new venture and cannot give specific figures on the performance of your business, quote figures for the industry or your competitors. These real figures carry more weight than your assumed projections and give more reality to your plan.

Choose A Huge Market

Especially in the internet world, investors are looking more at the market than at the detailed specifics of your financials. Choose a market that is big enough to be an obvious good opportunity. A business which targets teenage girls who listen to music and has a reasonable chance of capturing 90% of the girls that are online is a huge opportunity. A business which targets net-savvy SAAB mechanics who need prosthetic limbs is not.

Registered Investors

United States > California

I am based in California. I am an economics major with an MBA and several years of business management experience. I work in the Financial insurance industry with a reputed private company. I am open to different sort of investments in various sectors. I am mostly an individual investor. My main investments are in commercial real estate and construction.

$70,450 to $3,500,500

United States > California

An extensive background as general counsel, entrpreneur, investor. Have launched start-up businesses later sold to major corporations e.g. Gillette, Zurich Insurance. In recent years invested $5 million in various law firms and lawsuits of social value.Have invested in numerous businesses both individually and as member of a group.

$5,000 to $100,000

United States > California

Serial Entrepenuer. Entrepenuer in Residence UCSD Connect San Diego. Last company was sold to VC funded competitor. Several current investments in private companies including my current company. Private investor & member of a small private group of investors.

$25,000 to $100,000

United States > California

Private real estate investing for three years. Private and public market investor for the past 10 years. 12 years of Military experience, 5 years as national guard. I have been a group and private investor in different situations.

$0 to $30,000

United States > Illinois

We are an investment bank out of Scottsdale, Arizona. We work on two types of transactions. We do debt financing and equity funding for privately held, small to middle market companies. We also do mergers and acquuisitions, from an advisory standpoint whether it be from the buy of sell side.

$300,000 to $100,000,000

United States > California

I manage a Real Estate Private Equity Fund. All investors and the fund are accredited. We invest in Real Estate projects only...development or renovation, etc. We are looking for min. 20% annual returns. We are in our sixth year of operation.

$50,000 to $300,000

Estonia > Tallinn

I am a private investor looking to fund inspiring businesses in California, US. I plan to live permanently in LA starting from 2012/2013 and assume involvement in the strategic or every-day management of investee businesses. I have long term experience from investment banking industry in Europe. It makes me confident that I can contribute a huge deal to your venture by advising on business strategy and financial managementin addition to providing the necessary capital.

$10,000 to $200,000

United States > California

As a private investor, I have been involved from a business side of my experience in all product ranges from cars, boats, computers, services, marketing and other venues. I look forward to reviewing proposals that match my interests.

$100 to $5,000,000